CONSTRUCTION: FEEDBACK.

Today we invited a selected audience to view our film. They gave us constructive feedback that will help to improve our film, ensuring that it fulfils its potential. This included:
- Deleting the music that ran over the library scene.
- Doing a voice over, over the first meeting of the player and the girl at the library as it is difficult to hear the  dialogue.
- Adding  in a short scene at the beginning where we establish that the girl wants a relationship and is into reading.
- Editing the stop motion scene where she is reading the book so that the smile at the end lasts longer to show how excited she is for the date. 

CONSTRUCTION: THE MONOLOGUE.

Today we made a monologue of the thoughts the girl was thinking when she found the sticky notes. We struggled to do this adlib and therefore wrote a monologue which would be said in time with the film. We filmed ourselves using iMovie on the Mac and then split the screen so that the viewer can see the film at the some point as the monologue. The image below shows how the screen is displayed. Here is the finished presentation of our monologue.

CONSTRUCTION: THE FINAL SCENE.

Today we filmed the final scene of our film. This included the girl bumping into the boy that really left her the sticky notes, we do this with a close up shot of the books the boy drops when walking, with a sticky note with the phrase "I see you got my sticky notes", this is the final scene of the film and ends with the tilt pan of the camera that rests on the girl and boy holding the book with the sticky note, gazing into each others eyes.