Today we invited a selected audience to view our film. They gave us constructive feedback that will help to improve our film, ensuring that it fulfils its potential. This included:
- Deleting the music that ran over the library scene.
- Doing a voice over, over the first meeting of the player and the girl at the library as it is difficult to hear the dialogue.
- Adding in a short scene at the beginning where we establish that the girl wants a relationship and is into reading.
- Editing the stop motion scene where she is reading the book so that the smile at the end lasts longer to show how excited she is for the date.
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